Revision Plan Project 3
- My peers are suggesting to me that I try to find evidence to either add or challenge Williams and Brandt with their original ideas. Some points that I have not added to my paper would be the idea of what sponsors mean to Hero narratives. Sponsors are very important according to Brandt and Hero Narratives usually never have sponsors. Maybe Hero Narratives think they are too good for help or maybe they are their own sponsor. This would be an idea I could put in to my essay to Add to Williams and Brandt.
- With my introduction my peers requested that I actually add more because I don’t have enough information on the different articles that I am using. I need more context in the intro and I need to add in Brandt because apparently I forgot to do that on my draft.
- With my evidence from the scholarly articles and literacy narratives I need to add more I say and talk more about why it connects instead of not giving much information. Overall I think I just really need more context, that is what I am realizing now because I have read my draft over again and it is also what my peers have suggested when it comes to this area.
